Welcome to the poetry playground. I love the glee and exuberance of the children in this photo. I look forward to reading your posts.
Last month, I challenged our memoir writing group to write a poem for April. I shared George Ella Lyon's "Where I'm From" as a mentor poem. I've had students write these and dabbled in the format, but this is the first time that I've completed one of my own.
I was talking with someone from another writing group that I challenged to write family stories in 2025. She was surprised to hear me say that writing is hard for me. I actually committed to finishing this poem for Poetry Friday so I would have a set deadline for finishing. It's still a draft, but I'm offering it here as my current effort.
Where I’m From
I am from the green glider in the front yard,
from Uncle Wiggily’s board game and Chatty Cathy.
I am from a simple gray three-bedroom home
with Daddy’s long-dreamed of family room addition.
I am from marigolds, princess feathers, red roses,
from the pink crepe myrtle and showy mimosa trees.
I am from a garden that occupied ¾ of the backyard
with rows of potatoes, tomatoes, green beans, and weeds.
I am from hanging laundry on the clothesline,
from sweeping the floors and weeding the garden.
I am from walks to the library with best friend, Dortha,
with a stop at Rexall Drug for strawberry ice cream cones.
I am from Hawthorne and William Gay Elementary Schools,
from the junior high Mustangs and high school’s black and gold
I am from Mrs. Truttman’s creation of “The Sugar Plum Tree,”
from Mrs. Lewallen’s adopted ship and memorized poems.
I am from Mrs. Frew’s split class with the addition of Charlie,
from learning some Braille and setting up math problems.
I am from Mrs. LeFlore’s newspaper from the Middle Ages,
from 6th grade graduation and “We’ll Remember Always.”
I am from Mrs. Long’s health classes (Have Another Cancer Stick!),
from Mrs. Massaro’s French classes and evening program,
I am from Mrs. Thrasher’s prep for Southeastern’s competitions,
from BFF Jan’s pledge to write a tear jerker in my senior yearbook (she did).
I am from grandmothers, Ella Martin and Martha Ada Young,
from Duff rancher and Scifres preacher grandfathers.
I am from morning Sunday School and evening Sacrament meetings,
from home study seminary and Gold and Green Balls.
I am from Primary on Thursdays and Mutual on Wednesdays,
from salt dough villages and scattered Israel on a bath towel.
I am from Billie Thompson’s Beehive class in the kitchen,
from recreational singing and square-dancing lessons.
I am from Scifres family reunions at Platt National Park,
from sleeping on pallets when visiting cousins,
I am from listening as grownups play Moon in the kitchen,
from loving the laughter and stories they told.
I am from a Dad who could fix anything and read my history books,
from a seamstress Mom who made Velma’s and my wedding dresses.
I am from Dad’s, “When you’re out of bananas, you’re out of groceries,”
to Mom’s Labor Day proclamations, “We are turning over a new leaf!”
I am from biscuits & gravy and chicken & dumplings,
from Aunt Edna’s fudge and Aunt Ruby Dee’s chocolate pies.
I am from Aunt Nan’s chilled glasses for root beer floats,
from blackberry cobbler and Great Grandma’s chocolate roll.
I am from summers in Tulsa with Velma’s growing family,
from sister Kay’s love of books passed on to me,
I am from brother Karl, the best friend any girl could have,
from siblings scattered across four states, but forever good friends.
I am from Ellis and Lillian, parents who taught by example,
from front yard waves with love & tears at the end of a visit.
I am from parents who loved fiercely, but left us too soon,
from their love that surrounds, supports and sustains me.
- Ramona Behnke, draft
I apologize for my tardiness in posting, I fought with Mr. Linky and finally settled on using Inlinkz. I hope it works for you.
So many wonderful images in your poem, Ramona - and a lovely peek into your well-rounded upbringing and education! I've often wondered how many "Where I'm From" poems have been written? George Ella's reach is far across space and time, literally and figuratively. Thanks for sharing, and thanks so much for hosting us all this week!
ReplyDeleteRamona, I enjoyed your poem because it was so full of the joy of family living and love of life. Your poem is comprehensive and gives me more information on your background. Thank you for being our Poetry Friday host.
ReplyDeleteSo much gratitude in this poem for so many experiences and people that loved you and helped you in your life. My son wrote one of these when he as in elementary school. I wonder how much you discovered that you’d forgotten as you wrote.
ReplyDeleteRamona, I recall undertaking this poetry challenge when I lived in the US. It was a most enjoyable reflection. However, I must admit my poem was not anywhere near your impressive effort. A most comprehensive and insightful rendering of where you are from. Well done. Thank you also for undertaking hosting duties.
ReplyDeleteI think everyone in the country can somehow relate to at least one or two things you mention in your poem - it's quite extensive, and I love the specificity! Thanks for hosting, as well.
ReplyDeleteSuch a picture you painted in your "I am from" poem full of heart, life, and loving family, thanks for sharing it, and for hosting us too!
ReplyDeleteThese are so much fun to write! I was thinking mine needs updating, since I wrote it in 2006, but I guess even though many things have happened to me since, I'm still from the same places. This is one assignment that kids always do so well.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing so much about yourself, Ramona. The specificity makes it interesting and relatable. I had to smile at Uncle Wiggily's, Chatty Cathy, and Rexall Drugs, especially. Thanks for hosting, too.
ReplyDeleteRamona, I remember playing the Uncle Wiggily board game at day camp! This brought forth my own set of childhood memories. I love that being specific is also what makes a poem universal. Thank you for sharing--I feel like I can see your childhood and family. And thanks for hosting!
ReplyDeleteRamona, I’ve written this form alongside children for years. Each time with a different result. That is the beauty of a good form, isn’t it? I love how yours is tied to memoir writing, so inclusive of your history. I had a Chatty Cathy, too! Thanks for hosting.
ReplyDeleteThe "Where I'm From" prompt is definitely one of my favorites. Loved reading your poem and learning more about you!! Thanks so much for hosting this week.
ReplyDeleteThanks for hosting us, Ramona--back later to read your poem with better attention!
ReplyDeleteI love the specific details in your poem, many of which felt familiar to me, too. Thank you for hosting today!
ReplyDeleteI teach and help hospice patients and others how to write their legacy stories. "Where I'm From" gives me a great idea for using this as a prompt to write these stories. Love your poem! Thank you
ReplyDeleteI'm curious about "Uncle Wiggly's board game" and how to play "Moon." And I love: I am from Dad’s, “When you’re out of bananas, you’re out of groceries,”/to Mom’s Labor Day proclamations, “We are turning over a new leaf!” Thanks for hosting, Ramona!
ReplyDeleteRamona, I love your draft and love learning more about you! :) I didn't think I'd get a blog post done this morning, but you inspired me to share my versions of this form again too. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI meant to add that I'm from a seamstress mom, too. She made everything from lavish Barbie outfits to our clothes for school too my sister's wedding dress. :D
ReplyDeleteThis is so wonderful, Ramona! I love the specific details and images you included, including the direct quotes from your parents. Your love for your family shines through this whole poem. Thanks so much for sharing and for hosting this week.
ReplyDeleteRomona, I am from poems are fascinating, but I found mine hard to write. I have to go back and look at the one I wrote now. You've shared some great details in yours. I think it's a great effort. Thanks for hosting.
ReplyDeleteDear Ramona, you had me at "green glider." Beautiful! Thank you. xo
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